28 Jan 2009 beautiful sky
 |  Category: Poetry, Shay

The bright blue sky

was as beautiful as me

The sky is the limit

by, shay rule age: 12

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  1. Chris
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    Chris 

    You should not use colors. They are very hard to read on the website. Also, this very haiku goes 4, 7, 6 and I’m pretty sure it’s supposed to be 5, 7, 5.

    Keep working on these! They’re awesome!

  2. shay
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    shay 

    why should i not use colors. Colors make up my life. With out colors life would be dull and boring. Have you ever heard the saying “colors make life beautiful”. so no mater what you say i will still write about colors.

    yours truly
    Shay R.

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